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I've been trying to work my way out of a bit of a drag, lately, so I'm trying a few new things. For instance, I'm drawing a Marvel superhero... something I almost never do. I'm also trying out a little graphic design, working with shapes and colors and such. It's not something I do often enough, so I figure it's good to bump the noggin a little and try to expand my sights.
Originally this was just a little inking practice... the illustration was drawn on sketch paper and inked digitally in Manga Studio EX. Total inking time, 'bout an hour, maybe hourannahalf. From there I brought it to Photoshop and began diddling with it some more... my color theory skills are pretty weak, but I did go into this with some ideas about "warm" and "cool" colors, which is something at least. I also did some playing about with basic shapes and composition, not so much trying anything academic... just moving elements about and seeing what I like the look of. Total time in Photoshop... 'bout another 3 hours, maybe? I did mess around a lot. At any rate, it's also possibly worth mentioning that I haven't been a Wolverine fan in over 10 years, not since the Silvestri days, so I might not have the character down so much as he is today... if you have issue with how he looks, remember that I'm an old-school Patch-in-Madripoor fan, not a current reader. In my mind he's always short, hairy, and ill-tempered. So anyhow, since this is half-expirimental, I'm open to any suggestions, ideas, comments or crits. If you got something constructive to say, say it! -EDIT- Couple of guys at PJ pointed out a damn fool error in anatomy that I can't really fix, but I can at least patch up (and have). Oh well, live n' learn. -EDIT II- Made a few more tweaks. CommentsLooking good man. I think he fades a bit into the bg. Maybe if you saturate the colors a bit more so he looks more orange instead of brownish I think it'd make him pop more.
Dunno, just my opinion, and I suck Nice work anyhow -- Succes is being on the road to your dream and enjoying the hike. I really like the heavy lines on the outside of the character, and the way those bleed into shadows; great technique, and it works really well here. I think the hairy level could have been raised (I'm an old-school guy too -- or is that just an old guy? I forget), but the pose is great. You also stopped the figure from being static with the flowing hair (beautifully done, btw). On the critical side, I think the character (as I recall him, at any rate) is more massive -- heavier torso and limbs, short stature, but barrel-chested and with very heavy arms -- but again, this is minor and your interpretation of him is clear, so meh.
His hips seem to be a bit short, but then, the figure is foreshortened, so it's not necessarily true. I like the feet; good work on those. The colors I'm ill-qualified to comment on, but I wondered if a different color for the background would help the figure stand out better somehow ... just a guess. Overall, I'm impressed, and the graphic "X" logo is nicely done. I think this is a good one, and anything I've said that sounded insulting is purely unintentional; I really think this is great. Well done as always, Ben! -- JDT My Blog Now faith is the assurance of things hoped for, the conviction of things not seen. -Heb. 11:1 Very nicely done. It is the character I remember from my high school days. I really like how the claws come out between his fingers instead out of the back of his hand. Personally, I think that makes more sense. I think I would soften the colors in the BG to make him stand out more. Your signature and the "X" are competing for attention. I'm still gonna fav it though.
-- It's okay guys all he wanted was his machete back.... I really like it. The lines and the almost vectored colouring style looks awesome.
-- AdamWitton.co.uk You captured him perfectly!! I just bought Manga Studio last week but haven't had time to work with it since I've got a painting I've been working on all week. Seems a pretty straight-forward program, though...I'm looking forward to tinkering with it.
-- "Everyone becomes closer to Buddha when they stop breathing. It's harder to be close while you still are..." Genjyo Sanzo member: ~AnimeDisneyClub~Crazy-about-Cloud~saiyukifanclub |
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